Really great start! You have used subheadings and write well. You do need to add visuals (pictures) with specific examples - which you need more of - link it with the documentary. Editing - you have mixed up sound with editing slightly and you need to provide examples of editing techniques (use editing help sheet I gave you in lesson). Sound - use/check terminology.
Really great start! You have used subheadings and write well.
ReplyDeleteYou do need to add visuals (pictures) with specific examples - which you need more of - link it with the documentary.
Editing - you have mixed up sound with editing slightly and you need to provide examples of editing techniques (use editing help sheet I gave you in lesson).
Sound - use/check terminology.
Great - in future check images when uploaded as when I open them they are very small and I can't really read the writing.
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