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I like how you have made one of your topic be about afro based music and dancing; i feel it will be more personal to you as you are from Africa and it will be a good way to express African dancing and music. I also like how you are going to show your personal experiences as well.
You have a good idea. I like the way you have included what digital published product you will use and that you are going to be interviewing Afro dancers.This will be a good feature within your article. You have also included a few images which show how you would want to design your published product.
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I like your ideas. You have stated what your ideas are well and they seem like good and clear ideas. The way you have described your ideas seems like you can write so much about about which is a brilliant thing
ReplyDeleteI like how you have made one of your topic be about afro based music and dancing; i feel it will be more personal to you as you are from Africa and it will be a good way to express African dancing and music. I also like how you are going to show your personal experiences as well.
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You have a good idea. I like the way you have included what digital published product you will use and that you are going to be interviewing Afro dancers.This will be a good feature within your article. You have also included a few images which show how you would want to design your published product.
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ReplyDelete2C.P6 (Pass) You have developed an appropriate concept for a digital publishing product with adequate planning.
Planning - provide examples (articles similar to yours, more layouts and examples).
To push for merit - you need to explain why this will suit your target audience and explain how your choice of medium (publishing platform) suits your article and its audience.
Research:
2B.P3 (Pass) You have developed an appropriate concept for a written digital media product using adequate research.
> To push to merit you must you must include some more secondary sources/ research.
In regards to research there could be more analysis on your chosen article themes and sources that you will be using.
You need to respond to the comments given with a reply on how you intend to use the feedback
ReplyDeleteI have taken on board the feedback given and made sure I included it into my work if there was anything needed that could be better.
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